This was our first draft for the video. We aren't 100% happy due to problems with our filming and therefore how we could edit it together, I will detail these issues in another post.
I think that the quality of the footage is really good, more effective when the background is more blurred, such as the footage around 1:40, which looks really professional, especially with the slight hand held camera. The effects of the colours look really effective, I think you should incorporate more of that so that theres a continuity maybe. I think that constructive criticismwise, you should try and match up the lip syncing a bit tighter, also, the slight jump cuts between similar shots could maybe be more continuous or change the location? I think that the video has a really good raw quality, and after tightening it up abit, would look brill.
Firstly, I think that the artost fits the song a lot more when he's just wearing the shirt and tie- The hooide looks a little bit too scruffy! I also like the pink/green effects as it make sit look interesting- however I do agree with maybe changing the artist as Sam just doesn't fit with the genre so much. I like the shots that he walks across without the camera panning too much- ot makes it look very professional, and him looking into the camera quite a lot really works. As long as the editing is maybe a bit more fluent and flowing this is reeeeeeally good!
It was nice, but the camerawork was wobbly and there seemed to be too many long shots for the most part - they also seemed too long, and that by trying to make it all a continuous piece of action it makes it seem too... off. All the action taking place in the same place adds to that feel, and with that being the only surreal aspect to the video (besides the colour shifts) it just seems out of place. The colour shifts also don't seem very appropriate.
I think that the quality of the footage is really good, more effective when the background is more blurred, such as the footage around 1:40, which looks really professional, especially with the slight hand held camera. The effects of the colours look really effective, I think you should incorporate more of that so that theres a continuity maybe. I think that constructive criticismwise, you should try and match up the lip syncing a bit tighter, also, the slight jump cuts between similar shots could maybe be more continuous or change the location? I think that the video has a really good raw quality, and after tightening it up abit, would look brill.
ReplyDeleteFirstly, I think that the artost fits the song a lot more when he's just wearing the shirt and tie- The hooide looks a little bit too scruffy! I also like the pink/green effects as it make sit look interesting- however I do agree with maybe changing the artist as Sam just doesn't fit with the genre so much. I like the shots that he walks across without the camera panning too much- ot makes it look very professional, and him looking into the camera quite a lot really works. As long as the editing is maybe a bit more fluent and flowing this is reeeeeeally good!
ReplyDeleteIt was nice, but the camerawork was wobbly and there seemed to be too many long shots for the most part - they also seemed too long, and that by trying to make it all a continuous piece of action it makes it seem too... off. All the action taking place in the same place adds to that feel, and with that being the only surreal aspect to the video (besides the colour shifts) it just seems out of place. The colour shifts also don't seem very appropriate.
ReplyDeleteIt was nice though, I thought.