We like the factor that the audience are both male and female as we expect that it would be difficult to please both. However we think you should consider making the age range wider. We like the idea of vintage and muted colours.
I liked the images, but there wasn't much there to get an idea of what you're trying to do. You said "incredibly indie", but as much as others like to say otherwise that's actually a broad selection of clothes and styles. I think you should probably try and be a bit more accurate with what their style is, but other than that it was okay.
From all your photos you can tell your style completely and you obviously have a very specific idea about the artist- which is definately going to make things easier in the long run! The muted colours and 'vintage' look fit perfectly with the stereotypically indie ideas and i think the whole thing will fit with the chosen genre seemlessly. thought about widening the age range a bit though? (this is possibly the only slight fault I could find..)
We like the factor that the audience are both male and female as we expect that it would be difficult to please both. However we think you should consider making the age range wider. We like the idea of vintage and muted colours.
ReplyDeleteI liked the images, but there wasn't much there to get an idea of what you're trying to do. You said "incredibly indie", but as much as others like to say otherwise that's actually a broad selection of clothes and styles. I think you should probably try and be a bit more accurate with what their style is, but other than that it was okay.
ReplyDeleteEh up James Byrne.
From all your photos you can tell your style completely and you obviously have a very specific idea about the artist- which is definately going to make things easier in the long run! The muted colours and 'vintage' look fit perfectly with the stereotypically indie ideas and i think the whole thing will fit with the chosen genre seemlessly.
ReplyDeletethought about widening the age range a bit though? (this is possibly the only slight fault I could find..)
I like the layout of your pitch! It's easy to view. All of your ideas fit together really well, and the name of your artist is cool too :)
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