Pitch Feedback

The positive feedback we have received is that our artist name is good and the editing ideas we have come up are good and will fit with the genre of the song we have chosen. The images we have used in the pitch are to demonstrate our genre and the style of our artist and rather than it being 'incredibly indie', it is 'stereotypically indie' which we and some others feel is clearly reflected. Two people said our age range of 16-19 is too low and in hindsight we do agree and have decided to change it to 16 - 30, which will be adjusted on our audience profile.