Peer Feedback For Video

'I think that the quality of the footage is really good, more effective when the background is more blurred, such as the footage around 1:40, which looks really professional, especially with the slight hand held camera. The effects of the colours look really effective, I think you should incorporate more of that so that there's a continuity maybe. I think that constructive criticismwise, you should try and match up the lip syncing a bit tighter, also, the slight jump cuts between similar shots could maybe be more continuous or change the location? I think that the video has a really good raw quality, and after tightening it up a bit, would look brill.'


'Firstly, I think that the artist fits the song a lot more when he's just wearing the shirt and tie- The hoodie looks a little bit too scruffy! I also like the pink/green effects as it make sit look interesting- however I do agree with maybe changing the artist as Sam just doesn't fit with the genre so much. I like the shots that he walks across without the camera panning too much- it makes it look very professional, and him looking into the camera quite a lot really works. As long as the editing is maybe a bit more fluent and flowing this is reeeeeeally good!'

Overall the feedback we received in the comments was really positive, as people liked our idea and the effects we used in the video. The way the artist acts in the video was also praised, so we will keep that element when we re film. The blurred backgrounds were also thought to look professional as were the shots were the artist walks along without the camera panning a lot, so we will definitely consider these shots when we film our final video. We have been advised to change our artist and improve on the lip syncing - something which we were already considering, as the artist in the video was only a temporary. Another piece of advise we received was that our editing needs to be more fluent and tighter, something that was a problem because of the way we filmed our shots, which we have already thought about when editing our draft and have considered ways of which we can stop this for our final video. We will also set up our location earlier than we did before, so we won't have to wait for our props to be delivered and therefore will have more filming time, which is crucial because we won't have as much daylight as we did for our draft.